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WHY WRITING LESS CAN OFFER MORE

April 8, 2010 by RDesprez 3 Comments

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I love the idea of sim­plic­i­ty in both my per­son­al and pro­fes­sion­al lives.

At this stage in my life, most of the rou­tine mate­r­i­al items I buy offer me lit­tle plea­sure. In our soci­ety, con­sumers are promised by cor­po­ra­tions that mate­ri­al­ism will bring us plea­sure. But too much stuff can become a bur­den (at least, that’s what I’ve been told) because some­one needs to sort, insure, and main­tain all these assets. Too many items also cre­ates visu­al clut­ter in a home.

I think one can apply the same ideas of sim­plic­i­ty to tech­ni­cal doc­u­men­ta­tion. Occa­sion­al­ly, I’ve worked with writ­ers who tend to write a lot about a sub­ject, some­times unnec­es­sar­i­ly. They write para­graphs about a sub­ject when one will do. In my opin­ion, these writ­ers just love to write and they share every­thing they know about a sub­ject. This to me is just more clutter.

Writ­ing less is even more impor­tant for an online envi­ron­ment. Usabil­i­ty guru Jakob Nielsen argues that online writ­ers should strive to write half of the con­tent they would for a print­ed doc­u­ment. When I am faced with a lot of scrolling on a web site or in an online help sys­tem, I find the con­tent can usu­al­ly be edit­ed or reor­ga­nized so the mate­r­i­al is eas­i­er to digest. Here are a few ben­e­fits of writ­ing less:

  • Your users get to the point faster as they won’t have to endure end­less scrolling online.
  • Less time required to write and edit reams of content.
  • Trans­la­tion costs will be lower.

It’s not eas­i­er to write less con­tent. Writ­ing less is often hard­er because I usu­al­ly have too much con­tent that needs to be stream­lined. But it’s a worth­while goal. Less is more.

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  1. Sy says

    April 1, 2012 at 9:48 pm

    Well said!

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  2. artier959 says

    April 1, 2012 at 9:48 pm

    Yes, absolute­ly true. How­ev­er, let’s not for­get lay­er­ing: for diverse audi­ence we can include more, still brief, infor­ma­tion if it is visu­al­ly sep­a­rat­ed to make clear that it is not cru­cial, but may still be worth to read for some in the audience.

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