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ChatGPT: The AI-Powered Proofreader

August 28, 2023 by RDesprez Leave a Comment

Chat­G­PT, a text-gen­er­at­ing mod­el devel­oped by Ope­nAI to sim­u­late respons­es that resem­ble human con­ver­sa­tions, saves you time and effort by edit­ing your documents.

Copy a page of con­tent into Chat­G­PT and request that it sum­ma­rize the infor­ma­tion. In sec­onds, it sum­ma­rizes the mate­r­i­al before your eyes—much faster than any human that I know.

For a tool that is just emerg­ing, it is sur­pris­ing­ly ver­sa­tile. You can ask it for help with pro­gram­ming, brain­storm­ing, writ­ing head­lines (Chat­G­PT sug­gest­ed the head­line for this blog post), trans­la­tions, mar­ket­ing mate­r­i­al, and plan­ning a trip.

A quick simple test

I decid­ed to give it a test. I copied an ear­li­er blog that I draft­ed about Mad­Cap Flare and delib­er­ate­ly added errors (high­light­ed in red) to the text. In my state­ment to Chat­G­PT, oth­er­wise known as a prompt, I wrote, “Check the fol­low­ing con­tent for incon­sis­tent acronyms, con­sis­tent spelling of com­pa­ny names, gram­mar and typos, and make sure all num­bers under 10 are spelled out.” 

In under 10 sec­onds, the AI tool gen­er­at­ed a new ver­sion of the con­tent and sum­ma­rized the edits made:

Chat­G­PT quick­ly caught all the errors and even cor­rect­ed the case of “Robo­Help,” which is the offi­cial name of the help author­ing tool.

Purge passive voice using ChatGPT

Many tech­ni­cal writ­ing depart­ments fer­ret out exam­ples of pas­sive voice and strive to re-write the con­tent so it is active because the writ­ing is more suc­cinct and eas­i­er to under­stand (of course, there is a place for pas­sive voice). In the fol­low­ing exam­ple, I asked Chat­G­PT to revise the fol­low­ing sen­tences that use pas­sive voice:

In moments, Chat­G­PT revised the sen­tences so they were active:

ChatGPT does have limitations

The AI tool does have its limitations:

  • Lacks under­stand­ing: If you write a tech­ni­cal report about a mine or a pro­pri­etary soft­ware pack­age, it will not under­stand the details of the con­tent. Sub­ject Mat­ter Experts must still vet the accu­ra­cy of the content.
  • Good prompts are required: Typ­ing vague com­ments like “edit this doc­u­ment” and the tool may not edit what you require. If you want to check a doc­u­ment for pas­sive voice, include the specifics of what you need.
  • Chat­G­PT was last updat­ed in 2021: If you require cur­rent infor­ma­tion about a major world event last year (such as Rus­sian’s inva­sion of Ukraine), Chat­G­PT will be “in the dark.”
  • Be care­ful of con­fi­den­tial­i­ty. See Gen­er­a­tive AI Chat­G­PT Can Dis­turbing­ly Gob­ble Up Your Pri­vate And Con­fi­den­tial Data, Fore­warns AI Ethics And AI Law

Still, it is sur­pris­ing­ly pow­er­ful and fast tool that can help with writ­ing and edit­ing. Check out ChatGPT. 

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Do We Rely Too Much on Technology?

June 18, 2015 by RDesprez Leave a Comment

Does soft­ware automa­tion improve or ham­per your life?

Most peo­ple embrace the idea of tech­nol­o­gy. How many peo­ple real­ly would rel­ish writ­ing a let­ter or even an email with­out spell check? Or endure a rush-hour dri­ve into a for­eign city with­out a GPS system?

Nicholas Carr, author of The Glass Cage, argues that for all of technology’s ben­e­fits, it has its share of per­ils. When peo­ple use com­put­ers, they often fall vic­tim to a pair of cog­ni­tive ailments—automation com­pla­cen­cy and automa­tion bias.

Technology Can Harm our Careers and Threaten Lives

Automa­tion com­pla­cen­cy lulls us into a false sense of secu­ri­ty. Carr writes: “We become so con­fi­dent that the machine will work flaw­less­ly, han­dling any chal­lenge that may arise, that we allow our atten­tion to drift. We dis­en­gage from our work, or at least the part of it that the soft­ware is han­dling, and as a result may miss sig­nals that some­thing is amiss.” Any­one who uses a word proces­sor will have expe­ri­enced this: per­haps the spell check doesn’t catch an embar­rass­ing error. Or a foot­er does not dis­play the cor­rect information.

Automa­tion bias occurs when peo­ple give too much cre­dence to the infor­ma­tion dis­played by a com­put­er. Even when the infor­ma­tion is wrong or mis­lead­ing, peo­ple may still believe it. One alarm­ing exam­ple is a dri­ver of a school bus who mis­tak­en­ly rammed into a con­crete bridge in Seat­tle, injur­ing 21 stu­dents. The dri­ver told police that he had been fol­low­ing the GPS instruc­tions and “did not see” signs and flash­ing lights warn­ing of the impend­ing bridge.

Soft­ware automa­tion is every­where in our soci­ety. Accoun­tants use deci­sion-sup­port soft­ware in cor­po­rate audits. The soft­ware expe­dites the work but “there are trou­bling signs that as the soft­ware becomes more capa­ble the accoun­tants become less so,” writes Carr. One study, con­duct­ed by a group of Aus­tralian pro­fes­sors, exam­ined the effect of the soft­ware sys­tems used by three account­ing firms. Those accoun­tants who had to make more of the deci­sions them­selves had “a sig­nif­i­cant­ly stronger under­stand­ing of dif­fer­ent forms of risk” than the oth­er accoun­tants who relied on the soft­ware. “The decline in learn­ing asso­ci­at­ed with advanced soft­ware affect­ed even vet­er­an audi­tors,” writes Carr.

A ten­den­cy to be increas­ing­ly reliant on soft­ware is not unique to accoun­tants. Finan­cial pro­fes­sion­als, lawyers, doc­tors, human resource pro­fes­sion­als, pilots all rely on soft­ware to com­plete aspects of their jobs. The book con­tains many exam­ples of how these well-edu­cat­ed pro­fes­sion­als become over­ly reliant on tech­nol­o­gy and make mistakes—sometimes life-threat­en­ing ones.

Online Information May Weaken our Memory

In the devel­oped world, most of can­not imag­ine our lives with­out an Inter­net con­nec­tion and a search engine.

When you type in a search query using Google, the search engine does a great job of fig­ur­ing out what you want. It cor­rects your spelling. It sug­gests search terms. It even antic­i­pates your needs based on who you are and the terms you have used in the past. Over time, you might think that users are learn­ing from Google’s sug­ges­tions so that they are more savvy when typ­ing search terms.

The oppo­site is true. A series of exper­i­ments in Sci­ence mag­a­zine show that all the avail­able online infor­ma­tion weak­ens our mem­o­ry for facts. Why remem­ber fac­tu­al con­tent when a search engine will do it for you? The researchers con­clud­ed: “Since search engines are con­tin­u­al­ly avail­able to us, we may often be in a state of not feel­ing we need to encode the infor­ma­tion internally.”

Amit Sing­hal, Google’s lead engi­neer, notes that the bet­ter Google’s search engine becomes, the lazier we are with our typ­ing and queries.

Most of us wouldn’t accept a world with­out soft­ware, whether it’s a GPS, bank­ing soft­ware, or a smart­phone. Tech­nol­o­gy has rev­o­lu­tion­ized our lives in many pos­i­tive ways. But for those of us enam­oured with tech­nol­o­gy, Carr’s book is a a cau­tion­ary tale—don’t let your guard down too much when using it.

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Improve your training with practice and feedback

September 24, 2014 by RDesprez Leave a Comment

Have you ever attend­ed a course or train­ing ses­sion that missed its mark?

Most of the cours­es that I have tak­en haven’t met my expec­ta­tions for dif­fer­ent rea­sons. In uni­ver­si­ty, there was the pro­fes­sor who’d lec­ture for an hour, lulling stu­dents to sleep. There was the work­place train­er who focused on how the soft­ware worked but not the tasks that stu­dents (or learn­ers) required. There was the employ­ee who was threat­ened about shar­ing too much for fear of los­ing her job so she with­held knowl­edge, ren­der­ing the train­ing almost use­less. I could go on.

In my expe­ri­ence, senior man­age­ment holds the belief that any­one can train. But few peo­ple do it well.

Too often train­ing is just a “pletho­ra of regur­gi­tat­ed knowl­edge,” said Jim Tall­man, pres­i­dent of North Pacif­ic Train­ing & Per­for­mance Inc. Tall­man spoke at the Cana­da West Chap­ter of the Soci­ety for Tech­ni­cal Com­mu­ni­ca­tion for a pro­fes­sion­al devel­op­ment ses­sion on Sep­tem­ber 13th.

Train­ing that focus­es on rehash­ing knowl­edge doesn’t help learn­ers per­form their jobs bet­ter and pro­vides incon­sis­tent results, he said.  Some exam­ples of inef­fec­tive train­ing include:

  • The cur­ricu­lum fol­lows the­o­ry, not skills or tasks that one per­forms on the job.
  • Con­tent fol­lows course design, not a task analysis.
  • Exam­ples focus on sys­tem fea­tures, not work­place processes.
  • The course high­lights the knowl­edge of the sys­tem, not improved performance.
  • The instruc­tor nev­er stops talking.

A better way to train

An alter­na­tive method of train­ing focus­es on improv­ing the learn­ers’ skills. Some ele­ments of effec­tive training:

  • Task analy­sis dri­ves course design.
  • Cur­ricu­lum reflects the job.
  • Con­tent is prac­tice-based and learn­er paced.
  • Course results in improved job performance.

He said: “This is the pre­ferred way…that train­ing should be designed to give learn­ers what they need and clients their money’s worth. Instruc­tion is based on how learn­ers learn and not on how much the train­er can demo his or her prowess in the field.”

Train­ing should be ide­al­ly 30 per­cent pre­sen­ta­tion or lec­ture and 60 per­cent hands-on (such as exer­cis­es or activ­i­ties), said Tall­man. The final 10 per­cent of the course should be allo­cat­ed on feed­back so that learn­ers can improve. Most tra­di­tion­al train­ing is reversed with the instruc­tor talk­ing most of the time and learn­ers’ eyes glaz­ing over after 20 min­utes of lec­ture, he said.

In addi­tion, effec­tive train­ing should be also mean­ing­ful, mem­o­rable, moti­va­tion­al, and mea­sur­able, Tall­man said.

  • Mean­ing­ful: Train­ing should be rel­e­vant for learn­ers so they can per­form key tasks rel­e­vant to their jobs.
  • Mem­o­rable: Learn­ers need to remem­ber their train­ing after the course. Job aids, hand­outs, and quick ref­er­ence cards may be able to assist.
  • Moti­va­tion­al: Train­ing should moti­vate learn­ers in the class­room so that they want to apply the new skills.
  • Mea­sur­able: Effec­tive train­ing teach­es new skills that can be observed. “Good learn­ing events stress observ­able behav­iors, give learn­ers suf­fi­cient prac­tice over time, and pro­vide per­for­mance feedback.”

Not sur­pris­ing­ly, Tall­man’s train­ing focused on prac­tice and feed­back so that learn­ers could improve. This was an excel­lent presentation!

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Managing risk in your career

May 19, 2014 by RDesprez Leave a Comment

Many Cana­di­ans are not risk tak­ers. We are a nation of home buy­ers (homes are per­ceived as safe and secure by many) and we grav­i­tate towards sta­ble jobs, ide­al­ly with full ben­e­fits and pensions.

In the book Start-up of You, LinkedIn co-founder and author Reid Hoff­man argues that overt­ly pur­su­ing safe­ty and secu­ri­ty in your career can leave you “…exposed to a huge blow-up in the future.”

Think of gov­ern­ment work­ers. They typ­i­cal­ly don’t take huge risks along the way in their careers. For their loy­al­ty, they receive incre­men­tal pay increas­es, good ben­e­fits, and a gen­er­ous pen­sion. For many peo­ple, this is utopia.

Com­pare these gov­ern­ment work­ers to real-estate agents, who need to hus­tle to find their work. Occa­sion­al­ly, they sell an expen­sive home and col­lect a lucra­tive com­mis­sion. The next month, how­ev­er, they may not sell any­thing. Their incomes are great some times, fol­lowed by lean periods.

Hoff­man writes: “He [the gov­ern­ment work­er] always eats well…until the day comes that gov­ern­ment pen­sions explode or aus­ter­i­ty mea­sures wipe out his depart­ment. Now he’s screwed. He will starve because, unlike the real estate agent, he has no idea how to deal with the downs…” A cen­tral theme of Hoff­man’s chap­ter on risk is that work­ers should take cal­cu­lat­ed risks in their careers to make them­selves more resilient when some­thing unex­pect­ed happens.

Title wave

Peo­ple don’t just per­ceive gov­ern­ment to be low risk. In the late 1990s, Nor­tel could do no wrong—it was seen as a great place to work and its CEO was her­ald­ed as a cap­i­tal­ist hero. At the time, employ­ees were envied. A few short years lat­er, after the dot-com bub­ble burst, Nor­tel laid off 60,000 employ­ees. In 2009, the com­pa­ny filed for bank­rupt­cy and now its pen­sion is in tat­ters. Long-term employ­ees must have been stunned.

Taking intelligent risks

If you lived on an African savan­nah in cen­turies past, avoid­ing risk—like com­ing face to face with a lion—made per­fect sense. Today, in the devel­oped world, most of us don’t need to wor­ry about get­ting eat­en alive. Hoff­man writes: “Over­es­ti­mat­ing risks and avoid­ing loss­es is a fine strat­e­gy for sur­viv­ing dan­ger­ous envi­ron­ments, but not for thriv­ing in a mod­ern career. When risks aren’t life-threat­en­ing, you have to over­come your brain’s dis­po­si­tion to avoid sur­viv­able risks.”

Hoff­man does not advo­cate tak­ing stu­pid risks. He argues that tak­ing risks makes sense when there’s a promise of a reward.

Here are some exam­ples of tak­ing risks in your career:

Risk Pos­si­ble reward
Work­ing on contract. Earn more income.
Improve the diver­si­ty of your work.
Increase your network.
Mov­ing to anoth­er country. Immerse your­self in anoth­er culture.
Learn anoth­er language.
Increase your net­work abroad.
Learn­ing on the job, even if it for less money. Learn new tech­nolo­gies or skills could that open doors down the road.
Return­ing to school. Learn new skills and knowledge.
Increase your net­work with peers.

Oth­er than con­tract­ing, I some­times take a cal­cu­lat­ed risk by pre­sent­ing a top­ic at an upcom­ing tech­ni­cal writ­ing con­fer­ence. How is that a risk? Because I don’t always know every­thing about the sub­ject. In some cas­es, I’ve just scratched the sur­face of a top­ic and I need to research the con­tent, cre­ate and prac­tice the pre­sen­ta­tion, and deliv­er it to a crowd of peers in a rel­a­tive­ly short time. This forces me to learn a lot about a sub­ject quick­ly and there is always a pos­si­bil­i­ty of fail­ure. Of course, there are ben­e­fits too. I learn new skills and I present my new knowl­edge to a crowd, which increas­es my vis­i­bil­i­ty. I also can use that research to present at oth­er events and writes arti­cles for mag­a­zines, such as the Soci­ety for Tech­ni­cal Com­mu­ni­ca­tion’s Inter­com magazine.

In the short term, avoid­ing risk seems like a good path for­ward. But over the long-haul, Hoff­man writes “low volatil­i­ty leads to increased vul­ner­a­bil­i­ty because it ren­ders the sys­tem [and your career] less resilient to unthink­able exter­nal shocks…If you don’t find risk, risk will find you.”

Do you agree? If so, how do you take risks at your work?

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Are we facing a “skills gap” in Information Technology?

August 1, 2012 by RDesprez 12 Comments

What new skills have you learned on your own time in the last six months?

If you’re like many IT peo­ple, you may be defer­ring to your boss when it comes to career devel­op­ment. Per­haps your com­pa­ny is ready to imple­ment a new Share­Point site and you’ve been immersed in that project for the last six months. Great. But have you been keep­ing your eye on indus­try trends on what skills are emerg­ing and those that are wan­ing? I sus­pect most peo­ple work­ing it IT would say “no.”

The June 4th edi­tion of Com­put­er­World mag­a­zine argues that com­pa­nies have lots of job open­ings but there are still many IT work­ers who are strug­gling to land jobs. The rea­son? A skills gap. The jobs are there but work­ers’ skills are not.

Todd Wein­man, a recruiter quot­ed in the arti­cle, said: “You can’t rely on a com­pa­ny for your growth and train­ing anymore…Except for a few enlight­ened com­pa­nies, if they’re train­ing you at all, they’re train­ing you for what they need, not nec­es­sar­i­ly train­ing for what you need to devel­op your tech­ni­cal skills over the long run.”

Employ­ers are clam­or­ing for can­di­dates with exper­tise in mobile app devel­op­ment, cloud com­put­ing, and busi­ness ana­lyt­ics, accord­ing to the arti­cle. But employ­ees may be tired of the self-devel­op­ment treadmill—especially if they are work­ing more than 50 hours per week.

Accord­ing to the arti­cle, here are some sug­ges­tions for thriv­ing in IT in the com­ing years:

* Cre­ate your own train­ing plan. Accord­ing a recent arti­cle pub­lished by the Har­vard Busi­ness Review, set aside a few hours each week on career development.

* Pur­sue train­ing and cer­ti­fi­ca­tions on your own time and at your expense. On a relat­ed note, I recent­ly read a book called the Six Fun­da­men­tals of Suc­cess by Stu­art R. Levine. Levine writes: “Take con­trol of your con­tin­u­ing edu­ca­tion and per­son­al growth.  Every six months, give your­self spe­cif­ic learn­ing goals…Too often peo­ple wait for their boss to tell them what skills they need. This is a stun­ning abdi­ca­tion of responsibility.”

* Devel­op soft skills, like com­mu­ni­ca­tion.

* Iden­ti­fy dif­fer­ent class­es of skills. Which tech­nolo­gies are emerg­ing, main­stream, and or lega­cy? Does your cur­rent exper­tise have a long future ahead of it? If not, what cer­ti­fi­ca­tions and train­ing do you need?

Here’s my take on it. I’ve worked about 15 years in IT and work­ers who enjoy learn­ing and are moti­vat­ed to learn appear to do bet­ter in the work­place. In con­trast, those employ­ees who decide to go on “career cruise con­trol” become vul­ner­a­ble dur­ing lay­offs because their skills are per­ceived to be “rusty.”

Obvi­ous advice? Per­haps. But many work­ers don’t seem to fol­low it. What do you think about this issue?

Check out the Com­put­er­World arti­cle.

 

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