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Is the Internet revolutionizing how we read?

December 18, 2011 by RDesprez 3 Comments

The Inter­net may be chang­ing how we read and think, accord­ing to a five-year study by schol­ars at the Uni­ver­si­ty Col­lege London.

The schol­ars doc­u­ment­ed the behav­iour of vis­i­tors to two pop­u­lar research sites that pro­vide access to jour­nal arti­cles, e‑books, and oth­er sources of writ­ten infor­ma­tion. They found that peo­ple using the sites exhib­it­ed “a form of skim­ming activ­i­ty,” spring­ing from one source to anoth­er. More­over, vis­i­tors rarely returned to any source they’d already vis­it­ed. They typ­i­cal­ly read no more than one or two pages of an arti­cle or book before they would vis­it anoth­er site.

The authors of the study note: “It is clear that users are not read­ing online in the tra­di­tion­al sense; indeed there are signs that new forms of “read­ing” are emerg­ing as users “pow­er browse” hor­i­zon­tal­ly through titles, con­tents pages and abstracts going for quick wins. It almost seems that they go online to avoid read­ing in the tra­di­tion­al sense.”

Patrick Kings­ley of the Guardian wrote an arti­cle about this phe­nom­e­non: “…because of the Inter­net, we have become very good at col­lect­ing a wide range of fac­tu­al tid­bits, we are also grad­u­al­ly for­get­ting how to sit back, con­tem­plate, and relate all these facts to each other.”

When I am using the Inter­net, I typ­i­cal­ly skim con­tent and often feel rushed. Most of the time, I’m research­ing con­tent with a def­i­nite goal in mind—such as draft­ing an arti­cle like this one!

How does this change affect our writ­ing? Usabil­i­ty guru Jakob Nielsen found that most read­ers’ eyes focus on the action-ori­ent­ed con­tent, such as prod­uct fea­tures and bul­let­ed lists. If read­ers encounter intro­duc­to­ry text on web pages, users often skip it. Nielsen calls intro­duc­to­ry para­graphs “blah-blah text.”

But intro­duc­to­ry text does have a role. He writes: “A brief intro­duc­tion can help users bet­ter under­stand the rest of the page. Even if they skip it ini­tial­ly, they might return lat­er if it does­n’t look intim­i­dat­ing­ly long and dense.”

He rec­om­mends writ­ers include the fol­low­ing content:
1) What’s the page about? A brief intro­duc­tion can help users bet­ter under­stand the rest of the page.
2) Why should read­ers care? What’s in it for them?

In this age of hur­ried read­ing, Nielsen’s research makes sense to me. Still with me?

Filed Under: Robert Desprez | Vancouver technical writer | Blog, Usability Tagged With: comprehension, Online Reading, Usability

Users struggle with comprehension using mobile phones

October 29, 2011 by RDesprez 1 Comment

Con­sumers love their smart phones but research com­plet­ed this ear­li­er this year showed that com­pre­hen­sion lev­els for “com­pli­cat­ed” web con­tent were 48 per­cent of desk­top scores.

The study per­formed by R.I. Singh from the Uni­ver­si­ty of Alber­ta found that read­ers strug­gled with read­ing the pri­va­cy poli­cies of 10 pop­u­lar web sites—including Google’s and Microsoft’s—and found that the con­tent was too com­pli­cat­ed. I’m not sur­prised. Last time I skimmed a pri­va­cy pol­i­cy (in fact, I try to avoid read­ing them) it seemed that it was writ­ten by a squad of lawyers. Facebook’s pri­va­cy pol­i­cy was a mind-numb­ing 5,789 words!

The study found that com­pre­hen­sion lev­els were low­er pri­mar­i­ly because of the mobile phone’s small­er size. Users can see less at any giv­en moment and they some­times must scroll around a page, which is distracting.

Usabil­i­ty guru Jakob Nielsen’s arti­cle also states that it’s chal­leng­ing to use mobile phones for the fol­low­ing reasons:
* Slug­gish downloads.
* No phys­i­cal key­board for data entry. Writ­ing a short e‑mail or text is tol­er­a­ble on an iPhone. A longer doc­u­ment quick­ly becomes tedious.
* No mouse for selection.
* Web sites are still fre­quent­ly designed for desk­top and lap­top use.

It seems that once con­sumers buy a smart phone, they love it. Peo­ple often pro­claim that they can’t believe they lived with­out one. But for all the con­ve­nience and the abil­i­ty to com­mu­ni­cate almost any­where, it seems that we have a long way to go to make web con­tent easy to under­stand on mobile phones.

Tech­ni­cal writ­ers are ide­al­ly suit­ed to help ensure that con­tent is opti­mized for mobile use.

Here’s Nielsen’s full article.

Filed Under: Online Writing for Mobile, Robert Desprez | Vancouver technical writer | Blog Tagged With: mobile, Online Reading, smartphones

AVOIDING INFOBESITY

December 26, 2010 by RDesprez 8 Comments

Christ­mas is here and it is a great time to exchange gifts and spend time with friends and family.

Christ­mas is also a time that is syn­ony­mous with over­con­sump­tion and overeat­ing. It seems that every month, I read some alarm­ing sta­tis­tic about North Amer­i­cans’ grow­ing girth. A sig­nif­i­cant por­tion of us are now clas­si­fied as obese.

Now there’s the term infobesity—the ten­den­cy to gorge one­self on infor­ma­tion. British jour­nal­ist John Naish used the term in his book Enough: Break­ing free from the world of more. Here’s an excerpt from the book:

“It involves fighting—and here’s my own new word—infobesity, by restrict­ing one’s data diet. There are com­pelling rea­sons. The glut of infor­ma­tion is not only caus­ing stress and con­fu­sion; it also makes us do irra­tional things such as ignore cru­cial health infor­ma­tion. The British Government’s lat­est sur­vey on our food-buy­ing pat­terns shows that while we are giv­en more infor­ma­tion than ever about healthy eat­ing, our con­sump­tion of fresh food has fallen…We are so wired to gath­er infor­ma­tion that often we no longer do any­thing use­ful with it. Instead of paus­ing to sift our intake for rel­e­vance and qual­i­ty, the dai­ly diet of pruri­ent, pro­found, con­fus­ing and con­flict­ing infor­ma­tion gets chucked on to a men­tal ash-heap of things vague­ly com­pre­hend­ed. Then we rush to try to make sense of it all…by get­ting more.”

Many of us are over­ex­posed to infor­ma­tion. With social media pro­lif­er­at­ing and smart phone adop­tion sky­rock­et­ing, it’s now eas­i­er than ever to read blog posts on the go, see what your vir­tu­al friends are doing, and check out the lat­est videos on YouTube.

As pro­fes­sion­al com­mu­ni­ca­tors, I think we should all be mind­ful of not con­tribut­ing to the del­uge of infor­ma­tion. For a relat­ed post, see Why Writ­ing Less Can Offer More.

Filed Under: Online Reading, Robert Desprez | Vancouver technical writer | Blog, Technology Tagged With: deluge, information overload, Online Reading

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